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Dear Darling

Dear darling Dear darling allow me to write you an open letter And be explicit about my feelings Remember a good story has more value when it is told And let people hear how lucky I am to have you My life without you was meaningless Forever stressed and making poor judgments And I attracted many ailments Ailments that I could have escaped by sticking with you I’ve known you for years yet I was so blind to see you Now that we are fond of each other I’m going to hold you tight and never leave you I feel younger each day just because of you Forgive me if I’m to explicit about our private life But you do me well when the mood is right To carry you around enhance my muscular fitness And speed up the pace of my heartbeat But then after heated rounds I sleep like a baby To be honest my love, you set my mind free And for all the goodies, I pay no fee Not even once you've let me down Dear darling, you can stop me if I’m exaggerating The moments I’ve spent with you You've lessened my stress and eliminated my depression I bet you can see that I’m always happy around you My brain works better than any complex machine My quality of life has improved because of your loyalty Miles we’ve travelled has brought us even closer With you on my side not even the sky is the limit.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 6/7/2015 9:43:00 AM
This shows how truly you love her, am very happy for you that you find someone suitable that hold you with her worm heart........A.M.
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Bongani Zungu
Date: 6/12/2015 1:09:00 AM
My dear friend fellow poet, Mr B is actually highlighting benefits of being active in a gym. Well there are similarities of benefits we enjoy from our loved ones one the gym. Your comment attests to that. Thank you
Date: 5/27/2015 3:13:00 AM
Excellent write Bongani,I like all the lines it is lovely and interesting,........AM.
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Bongani Zungu
Date: 6/4/2015 2:53:00 PM
HI Afolabi, still waiting as per your word.

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