Olivia Renne Poet Abecedarian

Dear Darling

I see you want to die, darling
I see it in your eyes
I see it on your wrists, your arms
Your stomach, hips and thighs.

But please, never try to, dear
Now, that would be a waste
Of a lovely soul
Compelling eyes
And a very pretty face.



~O

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Derrick Smith July 6, 2014 at 3:08 PM Good job my lady, it is a pleasure to be in such company and I hope that I may measure up someday

Tim Smith July 6, 2014 at 9:35 AM A nice win Olivia...hugs Tim

Robert Lindley July 6, 2014 at 7:43 AM Congrats on your win!!

Len Gasun July 6, 2014 at 1:21 AM A very beautiful heartfelt write my dear friend olivia. I like it. Thank u so much for sharing! congratulations on your great win! love and hugs, Leonora

Pandita Sietesantos July 5, 2014 at 5:59 PM Congratulations, Olivia, on a well-deserved fine win!

Dr.Ram Mehta July 5, 2014 at 12:25 AM Very deep and meaningful write, Olivia and congrats on the win

Litan Dey July 4, 2014 at 11:20 PM Love is flowing in your write, nice write....congratulations

Poet Destroyer A July 4, 2014 at 10:31 AM Olivia,, Congratulations, thank you EVER SO SO much... Keep Enjoying my contest, and my latest blog "Some Poems Are:" if you like. See you around, :) LINDA

Richard Palmer July 1, 2014 at 10:48 PM sad write,wanting to die is a form of weakness,encourage to fight,life changes in an instant no matter the situation,deep words Olivia