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Dear Dan, I sit here every day in class behind you at this desk, but barely can I concentrate on what the teacher says, for you are such a wonderful young man. Since Junior high, I’ve liked you very much. I felt entranced the first time that I saw your sweet cute face and hair blonde like the sun. But there’s a deeper reason I’m in awe. It’s obvious your mind is very sharp. I think you see I am studious too. I bet we have a lot of things in common. I want to know so much more about you. And so I’m asking you out on a date. I think you like to roller skate like me. Can we meet at the rink on Saturday? Your answer I’m awaiting eagerly. *Dedicated to one of my several school crushes, Dan Olsen. He never did talk to me and I was a bit too shy in those days to initiate a conversation with him. Written Feb. 2, 2019 for Faraz Ajmal's School Time Crush Poetry Contest

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Date: 3/9/2019 5:23:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Andrea. Eve ~`*
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Date: 3/9/2019 1:03:00 PM
In my previous school, I once had a crush on a girl, unfortunately I was never able to say it to her and now God knows where she is, for its been a year since I got settled in a new city and and school, sometime I do wonder that I should have gathered the strength to tell her, a letter would have been perfect, anyways there's no point in any of this now, many congratulations on your wonderful position in the contest, good luck and have a really nice day
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Date: 2/6/2019 10:57:00 PM
Hi Andrea, Oh! I can relate to this one, I think we have many crushes on young boys during our time at school, so well written, loved it, good luck in the contest and take care.......Vera
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Date: 2/3/2019 7:07:00 PM
Wonderfully expressive of a young girls dreams Andrea. I couldn't meet his rules for the contest so I can't enter mine I will post soon. xxoo : )
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Date: 2/3/2019 9:55:00 AM
Awwww.. that many hey... This is something so many can relate, however, i never had a school crush...
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 2/3/2019 4:52:00 PM
ok, I am glad you said you liked girls later or I'd have thought something else!! you were late bloomer I think.
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Silent One
Date: 2/3/2019 11:17:00 AM
I was so into my sports and I didnt like girls lol... However, that changed once I started college, I think you call that high school...
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 2/3/2019 10:42:00 AM
you did not crush on anyone? How is that possible?
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 2/3/2019 10:41:00 AM
Yeah, I crushed on at least seven guys from junior high through high school. No, let's make that ten!!! Dan was the longest one!
Date: 2/3/2019 7:46:00 AM
Many can relate to silent feelings such as the ones you express..this was a real crush..too bad he didn't know. Best for a win, Andrea.
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Date: 2/3/2019 7:08:00 AM
https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/god_give_me_much_strength_1111600 Interesting you asking him out on a date, Or is that supposed to be him asking you? Brought my wife home Friday evening after 5 days in the hospital with congestive heart failure due to pneumonia.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 2/3/2019 4:52:00 PM
sorry about your wife, James. As for this poem, I did it per the judge's rules. I had to ask my crush on a date!!
Date: 2/3/2019 1:13:00 AM
Great one, Andrea, I was the same way when I was in school .. Still am. good luck in the contest.
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Date: 2/2/2019 9:59:00 PM
How sweet this contest awakened this old reminiscing. Well done, Andrea.
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Date: 2/2/2019 9:44:00 PM
This is so sweet! Good luck in the contest :) xomo
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