Dear Daddy

The words that slid across my lips 
to linger on your ear
though well rehearsed
I feared the worst - 
THESE ones you wouldn't hear

The same I love yous spilled from me
as I stood beside your bed
and as I cried  
through half-closed eyes
you seemed to nod your head

A man of vast intelligence
and stimulating verse
you pardoned my
"simplicity"
preserving my self-worth

So splendid was your character
persuasion couldn't mar
Integrity was still to me
your greatest gift by far

A father of great sacrifice,
a husband kind and true
as mom recalled 
she showed us all
how much she cared for you

The hands that toiled 
on through the years
and never knew a rest
until your heart
refused its part
and followed you in death

You're not forgotten, daddy
your legacy remains:
To your adoration;
inspiration
I dedicate the same

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 5/14/2017 7:46:00 PM
Awesome tender tribute to your late father Gayle; I can relate when you say it feels like yesterday...Hope you had a happy Mom's Day~Che :)
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Gayle Rodd
Date: 5/14/2017 8:39:00 PM
Thank you Cheryl. It was wonderful. I hope your day was great too. Thank you for reading. My dad was one of a kind.
Date: 5/3/2017 12:24:00 PM
In this day and age when so many children grow up without their daddies aren't we lucky to have been blessed with a wonderful fathers. Sorry yours is no longer with you in body Gayle, great tribute. #7
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Gayle Rodd
Date: 5/3/2017 12:31:00 PM
Thank you Elizabeth. I was truly blessed. He's been gone about 16 years and it still feels like yesterday.
Date: 5/3/2017 10:36:00 AM
What a beautiful tribute Gayle. It makes me think about the relationship I have with my girls.
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Gayle Rodd
Date: 5/3/2017 11:09:00 AM
thank you Tim. He is sorely missed.
Date: 5/3/2017 7:44:00 AM
A nice poem ... Enjoyed reading ...
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Gayle Rodd
Date: 5/3/2017 7:57:00 AM
thank you so much Probir
Date: 5/3/2017 7:38:00 AM
Oh my, crying in my coffee, that is a wonderful write Gayle, a 7 & bless xomo
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Gayle Rodd
Date: 5/3/2017 7:57:00 AM
I know, I couldn't help but cry a little too!
Date: 5/3/2017 7:35:00 AM
Such a beautiful and heart touching tribute to your father. He sounds like he was an amazing man. Wonderfully written from the heart Gayle
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Gayle Rodd
Date: 5/3/2017 7:58:00 AM
I can't put into words what a great person he was (but I tried!)
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