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Dealership

she said
sleep
i thought
she said
jeep

so i
took her
for a test
drive
and

found
a few
gears
tight so
might

grease
them some
then give
another
hum

but
now i find
her body
paint was
just

cream
so i'm
enjoying
the ride
trying

to decide
should i
or could
i check
another

chassis
no she's
classy
and
i

know my
wheels are
spinning so
why would
i

even
think of
another make
or model since she
is such a take me for a spin

off
the lot
she's a pleasure
to sit in her seat and
take home but not own

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Date: 7/24/2019 9:34:00 AM
This awesome Jeff. I love love love love it. xomo!
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Jeff Connelly
Date: 7/24/2019 11:31:00 AM
This comment coming from you Maureen means more than anything. I bow to your poeticness (is that a word?)

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