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Deafening the Sound

loudly
       children's laughter echoes 
             on lonely blocks of mind
                                           ….silence


April 14 2020

Antonym Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Jenish Somadas

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 5/12/2020 2:56:00 PM

Hello Sandre, Lovely poem. Enjoy your day. Enjoy your day my friend.

Winged Warrior

Date: 4/22/2020 7:41:00 AM

Congrats!! on the win Sandra...great entry...stay safe my friend...^WW^ :o)

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 4/20/2020 9:28:00 AM

Creative and paradoxical , nostalgic a bit. Kudos for fab metaphoric poem in brevity. Pls Pleez do read and comment my newest poem too.

Silent One

Date: 4/19/2020 2:33:00 PM

Haunting...

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 4/18/2020 9:10:00 AM

Talented poetess - kudos - a gem and congrats on your win! Hugs, Jennifer.

Jc Hawkens

Date: 4/18/2020 8:07:00 AM

Even in my silence, it is lovely to hear your heart through your poetry, my friend. As always exceptionally penned. Congratulations

M. L. Kiser

Date: 4/17/2020 3:26:00 PM

Wow, powerful!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/16/2020 6:04:00 PM

Back with my congratulations, Sandra. How are you holding up, my friend?

Jenish Somadas

Date: 4/15/2020 11:16:00 PM

Laugher echoes..Mind silence.. Great verse.. Congrats Sandra..

Quoth Theraven

Date: 4/15/2020 10:52:00 PM

Sandra, The old soft shoe in voice. You come in soft like Vivaldi's Spring, and then slice the air like Beecham conducting La Boheme. -Richard

Chris Green

Date: 4/14/2020 5:18:00 PM

I'm with Andrea below, always up for the poetic challenge with such beauty and talent found in everything you write. Very appropriate for these days. best wishes in the contest

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/14/2020 3:56:00 PM

As usual, you were up for the challenge with a very insightful way to show these antonyms.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 4/14/2020 2:32:00 PM

Celebration of ...silence dearest , Sandra. A marvel of a verse! Hugs xxx

Vijay Pandit

Date: 4/14/2020 12:15:00 PM

Much depth to your verse my friend--you evoke the right feelings in just a few precious words, Sandy.

Sandra Adams
Date: 4/14/2020 12:46:00 PM

Thank you Vijay...I wrote three for this contest this week but never posted any, was going to decide today which I liked best and this one just kind of came today and the contest was almost full so I wrote it and posted it... hugs

Deafening the Sound

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