Deadly Raven

Sitting atop the old decaying tree Is a deadly raven quite pathetic Where his lusting eyes do more than just see An unsuspecting group thinks they are free Raven thinks of a move that’s genetic Sitting atop the old decaying tree No-one knows what it’s like to truly be One of this group, death is just magnetic Where his lusting eyes do more than just see Down he swoops taking one soul completely Returns to tree, looking quite poetic Sitting atop the old decaying tree The raven smiles as he caws wickedly Soul collecting might be more aesthetic Where his lusting eyes do more than just see The raven flies high looking lustfully All that he’s collected that’s prophetic Sitting atop the old decaying tree Where his lusting eyes do more than just see
Russell Sivey
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Hamilton Avatar
September 28, 2013 at 6:13 AM
fantastic villanelle Russell you bring the raven to life love it Shadow x smile
Onclaud Avatar
September 24, 2013 at 10:35 AM
once more, i am under seige, russell... quite grippingly beautiful and frightening too, ravens remind me of Poe!... i'm out of here!... amazing!..:) huggs
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September 24, 2013 at 8:15 AM
very creepy ~always pd
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