Wendy Watson Poet Verse

Deadly Light

flickering lantern
 swinging gently in the breeze
 in the glow of the moonlight
 flitting fireflies are lured ~ 
 towards the fatal attraction  
                 

22.05.20

Weaving A Wayra Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Nette Onclaud

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Aditi Mishra May 23, 2020 at 6:04 PM True words...fireflies are doomed as soon as they approach the lantern. Nevertheless we always find them flickering around light. Congratulations on your win Wendy :)

Nette Onclaud May 23, 2020 at 5:34 AM ohh, that fatal attraction...congrats on your well-deserved win my contest, wendy...huggs

Tom Cunningham May 22, 2020 at 9:26 PM Loved this one Wendy, congrats on your win. Hope you're well Tom

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders May 22, 2020 at 12:17 PM Such a tranquil scene till that fatal last line...wonderful element of surprise, Wendy! Best of luck in the contest :) xx Rhonda