Court Thompson Poet Rhyme

Dead Winter

Watching as the snow covers her stone,
A tear forms from my heart's deep unknown.
Slowly, it fades off my pale, and frail face,
Only to be replaced by death's cold, and frozen embrace.
I fall to my knee's,
Silently begging "Please!"
The ice in my soul is beginning to grow,
But i still feel her love, from six feet below.
All that's left now, is one snow laden rose.

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Carol Sunshine Brown January 16, 2012 at 11:10 AM Congratulations on your win in Sidney~LeeAnn's "DEAD WINTER" contest Court. Love, Carol

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl January 16, 2012 at 2:07 AM A great win Court congratulations x

Poet Destroyer A January 15, 2012 at 10:44 PM COURT,, a wonderful win ;-) congratulations, on a poem well done,..always yours truly,..p.d.

Joseph Burchett December 23, 2011 at 3:58 PM I feel the sadness from wich this was wrote this is a instant classic

Daver Austin December 20, 2011 at 10:38 AM Second line is choice. Fine memorial. Congrats on the selection. daver

Carol Sunshine Brown December 19, 2011 at 9:29 AM Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week Court. I hope to see you as a premium member in the new year. Love, Carol

Carol Sunshine Brown December 9, 2011 at 6:19 AM Enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry today Court. Wishing you a beautiful weekend full of joy. Love, Carol

Kyle Carlson December 8, 2011 at 1:19 PM very sad but very beautiful just the same