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Dead Soul

Brimstone & fire for the liar. The false accuser the abuser Words written & carved in stone u will die alone perversion consumed your mind entombed. Wrong you are with your judgements & because of this i suffer unfair punishment?Will u ever grow u,p? or do u like being an infant? Blind 2 ur own mental illness! Step outside urself if only just this once rid ur mind of sex & lust your soul created in hell a heart too frozen to ever melt. I guess u'll remain living in your sad ignorant bliss One thing i truely wish Is that you would of been honest about yourself years of mine life & time wasted now Like my gum you chewed me up & spit me out

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 9/2/2014 6:33:00 PM
Hi Mariann, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 9/2/2014 8:26:00 AM
Mariann, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry:) Here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 9/1/2014 1:21:00 PM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Mariann - I choose your first great written poem- You write skillfully - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/30/2014 12:00:00 AM
Wow! This is such a deep powerful write! A warm welcome to PoetrySoup - happy writings! Pandita
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