Dead sled ahead

So its sled dead..Ahead! E V's get ice'd with outage The tortoise smiles long.'

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 1/26/2024 10:52:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your creative Haiku write. Have a blessed day writing away.....................

Joe Maverick
Date: 1/26/2024 11:34:00 AM

Hey thanks Paula, much appreciated.'

James Peranteau

Date: 1/24/2024 3:50:00 AM

ahhh, i have the African Spurred Tortoise and dread the thought of subjecting him in such the burrrr, yet i hear buhbud could handle sum uv it ;)

Joe Maverick
Date: 1/24/2024 1:46:00 PM

LOL))) good one James.'

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/19/2024 12:21:00 AM

So what is that tortoise doing out there in the cold? Haha. Thanks for the recent visit to my poetry, Joe

Joe Maverick
Date: 1/19/2024 10:50:00 AM

Well its a long story Andrea..The Very Tortoise in question Mot the mottled.' Was quite happy in Florida until biden decided the midwest was not Diverse enough.! and ev's needed To be appreciated for speed so Mot was to race against the shiny cars, it seems he won by Default, but he can't collect the Cash as they have decided he Cheated' now he's stuck in the Cold just another winner denied.!

Arlo Parker

Date: 1/18/2024 5:23:00 PM

Huskies pulling E.Vehicle thru the snow...not as planned by Biden Administration. :o(

Joe Maverick
Date: 1/18/2024 11:27:00 PM

Well if they do resort to that I suppose the operatives will be Sworn to secrecy, and dogs called Hush-kies from the shlush-kies

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 1/18/2024 4:19:00 PM

something kind of comical about your Haiku...about the tortoise smiling because the SV is dead. priceless

Joe Maverick
Date: 1/18/2024 4:34:00 PM

Thank you Sara your prescence Also is priceless.' Be blessed.!

Silent One

Date: 1/18/2024 12:16:00 PM

Interesting arrangement dear Joe..

Joe Maverick
Date: 1/18/2024 2:24:00 PM

Probably not that precise Si.' I did rush it off this morning Though? Thank you btw.'