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Dead Sea

Cosmic ocean save a space
For me among the stars
For one day I'll return to 
These supernal reservoirs
What's left of me will cease
To be when I am finally home
And merge with other souls 
Amidst the spatial catacomb

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Teddy Kimathi

July 15, 2016 at 3:58 PM

Greetings Michael. Congrats for having your poem featured in the Poetry Soup homepage!!! ;-)

Poet Destroyer A

July 2, 2016 at 2:46 AM

Michael,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Skat A

July 2, 2016 at 12:22 AM

Michael, Welcome to poetry soup, after reading this I know you are an Accomplished writer. Glad to see you enjoying it so much here. Flourishing among this community is easier than you think. Keep up the good work. *SKAT*

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