Dead Relation

Relatively breathing
Among the lonely dead
The only way to see them
To look within your head

The accidental answers
The questions that remain
The threads that have forsaken
And then everything’s decay

Disturbed and undecided
The darkness sticks like glue
It manifests frustration
And then takes it out on you

Poisoning the answers
Eliminating doubt
A shape within the circle
A twist that spirals out

Such homicidal breathing
Among the lonely dead
The only way to hide now
To forget what’s in your head
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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July 31, 2008 at 12:35 AM
Ian - This poem flowed right into a fantastic ending - great job - God Bless
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