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dead red cardinal

dead red cardinal swarmed by sugar ant workers.... cat's supper consumed

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 7/17/2013 8:28:00 PM
This is a truthful event that is found here within nature my friend! I agree that cats do enjoy birds, they will attack any bird that is near them, if the bird isn't too big, even then they might still attack! I know those outdoor cats will eat the birds and leave very little left, well they won't eat the feathers! They love to leave gifts at the doorstep for the caretaker of the cats! And ants will be ants, they will eat almost any animal that is dead! I really enjoyed reading this poem!
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Date: 7/17/2013 5:49:00 PM
poor bird, lucky ants, poor cat. well done!
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Date: 7/17/2013 3:17:00 PM
gripping lines drew me in, sara... awed!..:) huggs
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Date: 7/17/2013 2:56:00 PM
oh my this is dark but I LOVE it.
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Date: 7/17/2013 2:56:00 PM
a fave.
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Date: 7/17/2013 12:44:00 PM
Hmmm.. cats ! Love them, but they do tend to bring us the wrong kind of 'gifts'. Great Haiku.
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Date: 7/17/2013 11:59:00 AM
lovely enjoyed it Shadow x smiles
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Date: 7/17/2013 8:47:00 AM
I think of all the poets.......you capture nature with the most finite eye. So magnified and wonderful!
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Date: 7/17/2013 6:59:00 AM
Lovely write Sara.Loved this one from you.
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