Sashi Prabhu Poet Kimo

Dead Palm Tree

9th march 2012, by : Sashi.Prabhu
Form:Kimo(10,7,6)

Vertical column of rotten dead wood,
Without its green crown it stood,
Dead palm tree understood.


One tree standing in a distant field Poetry Contest

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Kash Poet March 13, 2012 at 12:06 PM Nicely written Kimo By you Sashi.I think there shouldn't be any end rhyming in a Kimo. Sashi Prabhu March 13, 2012 at 12:09 PM thanks Kash... Iwill learn that..............

Andrea Dietrich March 11, 2012 at 12:43 AM I enjoyed reading this one about the poor dead palm tree, and thanks for the story of your dinner with your wife. So sweet. Sashi Prabhu March 11, 2012 at 8:37 AM thanks Andrea~~~~~~~sashi

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders March 9, 2012 at 4:14 PM A great kimo, Sashi! If it's for the contest, I hope it does well. Thanks for all the wonderful comments and taking the time to read my writes today. Hope you have a great weekend. Blessings, Rhonda Sashi Prabhu March 9, 2012 at 8:59 PM my first attempt at kimo.your words of encouragement are appreciated....thanks Rhonda and you too have a gr8 week end..~sashi