Dead Men Whistle For the Cool Breeze

The soul in my dead man whistles when you pass.

Is it asking for too much,to stick around and make it last?

...Was is it you or just a cool breeze? 

...Oh, the feeling of a cool breeze.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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July 9, 2016 at 2:47 PM
Excellent I love it. People don't comprehend. you need to
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