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Dead In His Tracks

Racing Proud Mammoth once steamed across wild prairie stopped dead in his tracks

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Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 11/17/2021 8:53:00 PM

Anon, thank you so much for your contribution of your Haiku poem 'Dead in his Tracks'. This poem gave me such a visual impact of a once proud, now abandoned locomotive. I can clearly imagine it through your impact of words. Once powerfully steaming to its destination...a destination of abandonment. I imagine it sitting on a sidetrack somewhere, only to be found in the thick of an overgrown wilderness. It is a sad but powerful write in a few words. Again, congratulations on your placement!