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Dead Heart

Black clouds : Blood red rain Thunder roars in agony A Broken Heart : Dies

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Date: 2/15/2012 11:05:00 PM
This is my favorite haiku from you so far. Especially the middle line. This is such an amazing haiku. I can definably feel the pain and agony of this deadening heart. Amazing stuff here. Always, Laura
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Date: 11/23/2010 6:31:00 PM
and this one i missed too. It's right at the top of the page. Keep up your haiku magic, HG and goodnight.
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Date: 2/17/2010 5:58:00 PM
I feel Deeply dark pain in this poem you wrote. it is beautiful though. im sorry for the late comment. i have just been really busy this week. anyway, im always enjoying your poetry filled with wisdom.Much love to you! -Always & Forever Lynn
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Date: 4/30/2009 6:01:00 PM
Wow beautifully written dedication to the dead heart. I always enjoy your work.
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Date: 4/23/2009 7:17:00 AM
awww hugs Light & Love
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Date: 4/20/2009 6:39:00 AM
Okay I am back because I have to say a few more things about this one. It goes in my favs for one. Second, if the heart is dead then it can not experience the magic and beauty of future love. Last but not least, Great writing, got me all worked up this morning. Smiles from Lolita~ oh and btw... thanks for yor wonderful comments on my writing.
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Date: 4/20/2009 6:27:00 AM
This is such an honest write. The pain is horrible when our hearts are broken, and it is sad to think of one dying from a broken heart. Great writing. Smiles from Lolita
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Date: 4/18/2009 2:28:00 PM
heartfelt sadness well described here,a broken heart dies,but it can be mended my friend,and after dark clouds im sure there ll be the sun and smiling clouds-smile -charma;-)
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Date: 4/18/2009 3:56:00 AM
i like the unique style your bring to the table ... and this haiku filled with pain ... is well written HG ! ~ Arany
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Date: 4/17/2009 7:54:00 PM
You capture the sadness of a broken heart so well, HG. "Blood red rain" is an awesome image! Outstandng work! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/17/2009 2:25:00 PM
The vivid imagery makes for a powerful impact. Interesting way to merge nature with emotion. Keep on writing. Have a nice day. Karen
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Date: 4/16/2009 10:13:00 PM
love the vividness of the imagery here. good stuff
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Date: 4/16/2009 1:34:00 PM
i can feel this too,black clouds,hope sun shines soon-well penned my friend-charma
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Date: 4/16/2009 11:26:00 AM
Painfully sublime, the darkness of the clouds can be felt ... bravo
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Date: 4/16/2009 5:09:00 AM
This is very dark. I feel you in this painful write. I know you will forever grieve for your love, but are you ok dear brother? Thinking of you. Love always, Shar
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Date: 4/16/2009 1:31:00 AM
A deepfelt poem HG. Blood red rain. God Bless. Leon
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Date: 4/16/2009 12:55:00 AM
Amazing HG, love the imagery...Raul
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Date: 4/16/2009 12:27:00 AM
Vivid imagery and strong wording... a powerful piece my friend! Best wishes, Keith
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