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Dead Heart

Black clouds : Blood red rain
Thunder roars in agony
 A Broken Heart : Dies

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Laura Breidenthal

February 15, 2012 at 11:05 PM

This is my favorite haiku from you so far. Especially the middle line. This is such an amazing haiku. I can definably feel the pain and agony of this deadening heart. Amazing stuff here. Always, Laura

Andrea Dietrich

November 23, 2010 at 6:31 PM

and this one i missed too. It's right at the top of the page. Keep up your haiku magic, HG and goodnight.

Lynette Chachere

February 17, 2010 at 5:58 PM

I feel Deeply dark pain in this poem you wrote. it is beautiful though. im sorry for the late comment. i have just been really busy this week. anyway, im always enjoying your poetry filled with wisdom.Much love to you! -Always & Forever Lynn

Alley Poe

April 30, 2009 at 6:01 PM

Wow beautifully written dedication to the dead heart. I always enjoy your work.

Debbie Guzzi

April 23, 2009 at 7:17 AM

awww hugs Light & Love

Lena Townsend

April 20, 2009 at 6:39 AM

Okay I am back because I have to say a few more things about this one. It goes in my favs for one. Second, if the heart is dead then it can not experience the magic and beauty of future love. Last but not least, Great writing, got me all worked up this morning. Smiles from Lolita~ oh and btw... thanks for yor wonderful comments on my writing.

Lena Townsend

April 20, 2009 at 6:27 AM

This is such an honest write. The pain is horrible when our hearts are broken, and it is sad to think of one dying from a broken heart. Great writing. Smiles from Lolita

Charmaine Chircop

April 18, 2009 at 2:28 PM

heartfelt sadness well described here,a broken heart dies,but it can be mended my friend,and after dark clouds im sure there ll be the sun and smiling clouds-smile -charma;-)

Arany P.

April 18, 2009 at 3:56 AM

i like the unique style your bring to the table ... and this haiku filled with pain ... is well written HG ! ~ Arany

Carolyn Devonshire

April 17, 2009 at 7:54 PM

You capture the sadness of a broken heart so well, HG. "Blood red rain" is an awesome image! Outstandng work! Love, Carolyn

April 17, 2009 at 2:25 PM

The vivid imagery makes for a powerful impact. Interesting way to merge nature with emotion. Keep on writing. Have a nice day. Karen

Brian Anderson

April 16, 2009 at 10:13 PM

love the vividness of the imagery here. good stuff

Charmaine Chircop

April 16, 2009 at 1:34 PM

i can feel this too,black clouds,hope sun shines soon-well penned my friend-charma

L'Nass Shango

April 16, 2009 at 11:26 AM

Painfully sublime, the darkness of the clouds can be felt ... bravo

Sharon Winter

April 16, 2009 at 5:09 AM

This is very dark. I feel you in this painful write. I know you will forever grieve for your love, but are you ok dear brother? Thinking of you. Love always, Shar