Dead Flies

dead flies trapped
in cobwebs and dust - -
a spider feeds

for Francine’s Cobwebs & Dust contest
(Cobwebs & Dust)
23rd March

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Mike Dailey

Date: 4/2/2012 9:22:00 AM

I am not a big fan of Haiku but this had winner written all over it. Congratulations on a well deserved win.

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 4/1/2012 6:06:00 PM

How can anybody NOT read a poem that has a title like this? haha. great poem and win Jack.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/1/2012 12:44:00 PM

I am very happy to send you this congratulations on your win in Francine's "Cobwebs And Dust" contest Jack. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/31/2012 10:03:00 PM

congrats Jack on a cool write and win for this clever piece luv.. how are u feeling today??

Kim Merryman

Date: 3/31/2012 9:21:00 PM

Congrats on your win with this great haiku, Jack! Love, KIm

Francine Roberts

Date: 3/31/2012 7:45:00 PM

congrats Jack on your win with this great haiku

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/26/2012 10:03:00 PM

I sure like THIS one. I just love this kind of haiku that makes me really imagine the scene.

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 3/24/2012 12:30:00 PM

very descriptive haiku! hope she likes it :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/24/2012 10:37:00 AM

my wife has enjoyed your entry for competition and wishes you best of luck. sending prayers for your surgery next week too and thank you for yours for us here. Ron.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 3/23/2012 6:10:00 PM

Go Jack GO! You have achieved haikudom!! LOL Light & Love

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 3/23/2012 5:13:00 PM

Sounds like a feast Jack; just for the flies though:) All the best in the contest Lizzie

Elizabeth Wesley
Date: 3/23/2012 5:14:00 PM

Just for the spider! ha ha silly aren't I

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 3/23/2012 3:14:00 PM

Garden patrol.....good!!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/23/2012 2:52:00 PM

Oooh, very creative interpretation for Francine's contest, Jack. I'm sure she'll enjoy reading this incredible haiku. Best wishes in the contest! Love, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/23/2012 1:42:00 PM

Reads like a sure winner..Good luck in the contest...I know that spider is going to enjoy that meal..Thanks for the kind reviews of my work..Your stopping by is always uplifting..Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/23/2012 1:18:00 PM

Well done Jack, luck to you in contest. Have a lovely weekend. - oxox Anne-Lise

Russell Sivey

Date: 3/23/2012 1:03:00 PM

This is a fantastic write my friend! This is a wonderful poem for the Cobwebs & Dust contest! Very nice job Jack! Great Work!!

John Rhinem

Date: 3/23/2012 11:48:00 AM

Smile ˜ Hmmm, Food For Thought ˜ Hahaha ˜ Love, John!:) ˜

Ann Roske

Date: 3/23/2012 11:45:00 AM

Good one Jack! Good luck in the contest.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/23/2012 11:39:00 AM

I am enjoying reading up on all the poetry I can today. I am happy yours was one that I was able to read today. The weekend is here and I must also make time for my family life. I will be back on Monday as usual and I wish you a beautiful weekend filled with renewed inspiration Jack. Love, Carol