Dead Flies

dead flies trapped
in cobwebs and dust - -
a spider feeds

for Francine’s Cobwebs & Dust contest
(Cobwebs & Dust)
23rd March

foodhaiku

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Mike Dailey

April 2, 2012 at 9:22 AM

I am not a big fan of Haiku but this had winner written all over it. Congratulations on a well deserved win.

Robert A. Dufresne

April 1, 2012 at 6:06 PM

How can anybody NOT read a poem that has a title like this? haha. great poem and win Jack.

Carol Sunshine Brown

April 1, 2012 at 12:44 PM

I am very happy to send you this congratulations on your win in Francine's "Cobwebs And Dust" contest Jack. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

March 31, 2012 at 10:03 PM

congrats Jack on a cool write and win for this clever piece luv.. how are u feeling today??

Kim Merryman

March 31, 2012 at 9:21 PM

Congrats on your win with this great haiku, Jack! Love, KIm

Francine Roberts

March 31, 2012 at 7:45 PM

congrats Jack on your win with this great haiku

Andrea Dietrich

March 26, 2012 at 10:03 PM

I sure like THIS one. I just love this kind of haiku that makes me really imagine the scene.

Black Eyed Susan

March 24, 2012 at 12:30 PM

very descriptive haiku! hope she likes it :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

March 24, 2012 at 10:37 AM

my wife has enjoyed your entry for competition and wishes you best of luck. sending prayers for your surgery next week too and thank you for yours for us here. Ron.

Debbie Guzzi

March 23, 2012 at 6:10 PM

Go Jack GO! You have achieved haikudom!! LOL Light & Love

Elizabeth Wesley

March 23, 2012 at 5:13 PM

Sounds like a feast Jack; just for the flies though:) All the best in the contest Lizzie

Elizabeth Wesley

March 23, 2012 at 5:14 PM

Just for the spider! ha ha silly aren't I

Doris Culverhouse

March 23, 2012 at 3:14 PM

Garden patrol.....good!!

Carolyn Devonshire

March 23, 2012 at 2:52 PM

Oooh, very creative interpretation for Francine's contest, Jack. I'm sure she'll enjoy reading this incredible haiku. Best wishes in the contest! Love, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick

March 23, 2012 at 1:42 PM

Reads like a sure winner..Good luck in the contest...I know that spider is going to enjoy that meal..Thanks for the kind reviews of my work..Your stopping by is always uplifting..Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 23, 2012 at 1:18 PM

Well done Jack, luck to you in contest. Have a lovely weekend. - oxox Anne-Lise

Russell Sivey

March 23, 2012 at 1:03 PM

This is a fantastic write my friend! This is a wonderful poem for the Cobwebs & Dust contest! Very nice job Jack! Great Work!!

John Rhinem

March 23, 2012 at 11:48 AM

Smile ˜ Hmmm, Food For Thought ˜ Hahaha ˜ Love, John!:) ˜

Ann Roske

March 23, 2012 at 11:45 AM

Good one Jack! Good luck in the contest.

Carol Sunshine Brown

March 23, 2012 at 11:39 AM

I am enjoying reading up on all the poetry I can today. I am happy yours was one that I was able to read today. The weekend is here and I must also make time for my family life. I will be back on Monday as usual and I wish you a beautiful weekend filled with renewed inspiration Jack. Love, Carol