Dead

she surfaces like a sleek seal
like a bullet from the sea
by text this time
hesitant
apologizing
ready to glide past all the trauma
un huh no way sister
not this time
I'm holding her to the fire
I catch her in lie in the second text
I feel the lines in my face
go
and my heart drops
I wonder
six months now
she must look older
she's passed that 30 mark
and she's killing herself with alcohol
drugs
and a man with a hard hand
losing her looks
soon, nothing to trade on
she was always so beautiful
she was the other half of my soul
but that daughter
is dead.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Joseph Avatar
June 20, 2009 at 11:56 AM
The hard lesson to learn is support vs. enableing. When she chooses a violent man because he supplies her with drugs and alcohol and trades her freedom (can't work, cant go to meetings etc) for the ability to live in a sheltered paradise, I cannot support that.
Suzadail Jr. Avatar
June 19, 2009 at 12:27 PM
This one hurts. I saw it in a friends daughter. She is still a human being and needs a lot of support. God Bless. Vince
Goff Avatar
June 18, 2009 at 7:11 PM
wow, the sad poems are bursting out tonight, I just cried a bucket with my posting a few minutes ago, Veronica, nice write, jim
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