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Dazzling In Sweet Madness

The parade of magnetic sparklers blaze the café Soon, a flushed crowd tingles on popped wine dazzling in sweet madness, more hours to sashay; while I, I lose myself in a mist of a song’s last line “City of Lights” bathes in drops of fire glowers where new romance thrills starry-eyed lovers

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/27/2012 12:37:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words on my poetry. It is always a pleasure to read your writings Nette. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/5/2012 11:19:00 AM
Use 'paints'instead of 'circling' OR change Palette to a single syll word
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Date: 1/19/2012 8:20:00 AM
Congratulations on the win for your poem in Debbie's "City Lights" contest Nette. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/19/2012 1:14:00 AM
very good Nette, tinged with nostalgia, methinks...
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Date: 1/18/2012 10:43:00 PM
Beautifully written Nette. Congratulations on your win
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Date: 1/18/2012 8:45:00 PM
Past memories of Paris night is very bright, loved and enjoyed, bl
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Date: 1/16/2012 4:37:00 PM
sticks in the mind, memories of times, when life was sweet n gay, not a homo tone! just memory of happy days. well done babe....
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Date: 1/16/2012 11:48:00 AM
Okies nette! :)
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Date: 1/15/2012 3:18:00 PM
Wow, now that sounds like fun! I'm sure you did! Wondrous experience and what a description of this occurrence...And brought to me images directly from your mind! I love it Nette! Awesome Work!!
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Date: 1/15/2012 1:36:00 PM
Nette, I am overstimulated as I read about this Paris night with all its energy and at the same time, soaking up the beauty of the great artists of all time. I feel caught up in this moment....completely. Much enjoyed our lil glass of champagne. GWendolen
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Date: 1/15/2012 10:52:00 AM
just lovely nette, good luck in the contest
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Date: 1/15/2012 9:39:00 AM
Could be madness anywhere. MY favorite verse is the second with all the fantastic imaging you exude but the whole poem is vivid and profound!
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Date: 1/15/2012 9:23:00 AM
Absolutely lovely. Fills one with a longing to be there. Love the way you compare the sights to great paintings by wonderful artists. Supercalifragilistic! God Bless, JB
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Date: 1/15/2012 7:48:00 AM
Outstanding write Nette... Paris??? Vacation or are you writing from a past visit... lovely on any level... luv n huge hugs MIchael
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Date: 1/15/2012 7:19:00 AM
Just beautiful Nette....I love it.Sweet madness. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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