Dazzling In Sweet Madness

The parade of magnetic sparklers blaze the café Soon, a flushed crowd tingles on popped wine dazzling in sweet madness, more hours to sashay; while I, I lose myself in a mist of a song’s last line “City of Lights” bathes in drops of fire glowers where new romance thrills starry-eyed lovers
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Brown Avatar
February 27, 2012 at 12:37 PM
Thank you for your kind words on my poetry. It is always a pleasure to read your writings Nette. Love, Carol
Poet Avatar
February 5, 2012 at 11:19 AM
Use 'paints'instead of 'circling' OR change Palette to a single syll word
Brown Avatar
January 19, 2012 at 8:20 AM
Congratulations on the win for your poem in Debbie's "City Lights" contest Nette. Love, Carol
Johnson Avatar
January 19, 2012 at 1:14 AM
very good Nette, tinged with nostalgia, methinks...
Quigley Avatar
January 18, 2012 at 10:43 PM
Beautifully written Nette. Congratulations on your win
Devnath  Avatar
January 18, 2012 at 8:45 PM
Past memories of Paris night is very bright, loved and enjoyed, bl
Johnson Avatar
January 16, 2012 at 4:37 PM
sticks in the mind, memories of times, when life was sweet n gay, not a homo tone! just memory of happy days. well done babe....
Guzzi Avatar
January 16, 2012 at 11:48 AM
Okies nette! :)
Sivey Avatar
January 15, 2012 at 3:18 PM
Wow, now that sounds like fun! I'm sure you did! Wondrous experience and what a description of this occurrence...And brought to me images directly from your mind! I love it Nette! Awesome Work!!
Song Avatar
January 15, 2012 at 1:36 PM
Nette, I am overstimulated as I read about this Paris night with all its energy and at the same time, soaking up the beauty of the great artists of all time. I feel caught up in this moment....completely. Much enjoyed our lil glass of champagne. GWendolen
Roberts Avatar
January 15, 2012 at 10:52 AM
just lovely nette, good luck in the contest
Wesley Avatar
January 15, 2012 at 9:39 AM
Could be madness anywhere. MY favorite verse is the second with all the fantastic imaging you exude but the whole poem is vivid and profound!
Ball Avatar
January 15, 2012 at 9:23 AM
Absolutely lovely. Fills one with a longing to be there. Love the way you compare the sights to great paintings by wonderful artists. Supercalifragilistic! God Bless, JB
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January 15, 2012 at 7:48 AM
Outstanding write Nette... Paris??? Vacation or are you writing from a past visit... lovely on any level... luv n huge hugs MIchael
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January 15, 2012 at 7:19 AM
Just beautiful Nette....I love it.Sweet madness. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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