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Dazzling Fragrance Of The Rain

As I venture across the salty landscape it matters not my feet are tender. Into the flowered fields I wander giving myself to sweet surrender. Mists of showers upon my shoulders dancing light as a fairy wing, dusting my soul with awe and wonder; lifting my heart and letting it sing. Inhaling deeply of nature's tonic, tasting the clouds upon my tongue. Soon the droplets will be subdued just as a bell that has been rung. Till then I'm loving this magical fragrance that brings me peace and rests my heart. Or I'll step high in a gypsy dance; twirling my skirts as the sky blows apart! Written by Deb Wilson for Nette's contest "Fragrance Of Rain" November 16, 2013

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Date: 12/27/2013 7:56:00 PM
Wonderful poetry, and so visual. shows real talent. well done. best wishes. Pete.
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Date: 11/24/2013 9:14:00 PM
Beautiful, Deb! Congrats on your win...love and blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 11/23/2013 4:18:00 PM
Captivating winning work..I enjoyed reading this afternoon..Congrats...Sara
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Date: 11/21/2013 6:28:00 AM
ohh,the twirling of skirt...how dainty!..sweet cheers to you for a win in my contest, deb...:) huggs
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Date: 11/20/2013 5:09:00 PM
very enjoyable Deb fine pen congrats on your win Shadow x smile hug
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Date: 11/19/2013 9:41:00 PM
Hi Deb, , Congratulations on your beautiful FRAGRANCE OF RAIN poem... Hugs ~LINDA~
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Date: 11/19/2013 8:54:00 PM
this is really nice. I enjoyed how you had the rain coming at the end "as the sky blows apart" Congrats for your win, Deb.
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Date: 11/19/2013 9:13:00 AM
Congratulations on the win, Deb
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