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Dazzling Cosmos

Written: September 22, 2023
No 1242 New Poem Only Poetry Contest      Sponsored by: Brian Strand
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Jewel 
     winks 
            bloom
                in 
                    womb 
                     of 
             rubied 
      mystery
astral 
      ditties 
            waltz 
                 through 
                        moonlit 
                              cobalt
                                     nestled 
                                   on 
                         wings 
                       of 
                thunderbirds
      strewing 
drizzles 
       of 
       diamond 
               dust
                      dodge
                             argyle 
                                     tapestry
                                     in
                                lyrical 
                           luster 
                       of 
                  garnet 
              embers
           on 
       summer 
   night
 sky


NOTE::THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FORM VERSE using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' (intuitive cadence)& so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and responds thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretatIon unique to the moment& changing according to mood is inherently variable.

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Silent One September 22, 2023 at 12:17 PM First time I have seen this form and it cant be easy to format it like this. I hope it is appreciated in the contest..

Anne-Lise Andresen September 22, 2023 at 11:18 AM - I like this diamond dust line ... a unique shape ... creative - (Brian's contest back ... ) ... good luck in the contest :) - Have a lovely weekend, Las :) - hugs