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Written: September 22, 2023 No 1242 New Poem Only Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Brian Strand
______________________________________________________________ Jewel winks bloom in womb of rubied mystery astral ditties waltz through moonlit cobalt nestled on wings of thunderbirds strewing drizzles of diamond dust dodge argyle tapestry in lyrical luster of garnet embers on summer night sky NOTE::THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FORM VERSE using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' (intuitive cadence)& so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and responds thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretatIon unique to the moment& changing according to mood is inherently variable.

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Date: 9/22/2023 12:17:00 PM
First time I have seen this form and it cant be easy to format it like this. I hope it is appreciated in the contest..
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Date: 9/22/2023 11:18:00 AM
- I like this diamond dust line ... a unique shape ... creative - (Brian's contest back ... ) ... good luck in the contest :) - Have a lovely weekend, Las :) - hugs
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