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Dazzled

Ms Jo Hanley-Dunne, Ms Jo Hanley-Dunne, varnished and tarnished by Val d’Isere sun. The sway of your hips, the power to stun brings promise of love and nights filled with fun. Oh dazzle me, Goddess, you Queen of the Slopes; a Mistress of Moguls, oh show me the ropes. You’re someone who’s keen and someone who copes; you fill me with lust, you stimulate hopes. I know that you cook with consummate ease; I know that you dive, alone, if you please. Your place in the sun is large, Portuguese, and far from your yacht, you wind-surf the breeze. So join me, dear Venus, off piste, on a run, then tell me, my love, your heart, have I won? Oh! Rapturous joy. My courtship is done. I’m going to live with Ms Jo Hanley-Dunne. ~ For John Heck's Competition.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 10/31/2012 10:57:00 AM
Well written and a well deserved win. Congratulations
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Date: 10/30/2012 8:22:00 PM
Congrats, Charles. Nice going. Ralph
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Date: 10/29/2012 8:42:00 PM
CHARLES..:-), CONGRATULATIONS IN "Dana'lynn Smith" CONTEST... ALWAYS~ PD
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Date: 10/29/2012 3:20:00 PM
a fun one to read. Congrats in the new contest of "the girl"
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Date: 10/29/2012 6:01:00 AM
Congratulations on your super win in Dana'lynn's "The Girl" contest Charles. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/29/2012 12:34:00 AM
CONGRATS CHARLES ON A MAGNIFICENT WRITE AND WIN LUV ..
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Date: 7/13/2012 7:51:00 AM
Dear Charles - lucky girl! Kathy
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Date: 7/12/2012 12:11:00 PM
I have enjoyed reading your excellent poetry today Charles. I look forward to reading more of it as time permits. Love, Carol
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