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Dazed and Confused

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been dazed and confused
for so long it is not true
reminds me of me

For the: Sing Me A Senryu Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Maureen McGreavy
Song: Dazed and Confused – Led Zeppelin

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Pashang Salehi

Date: 9/2/2019 9:34:00 PM

Wow... my kind of thoughts...

Chris Green
Date: 9/3/2019 7:24:00 AM

Thank you so much Pashang

Gershon Wolf

Date: 9/2/2019 7:56:00 PM

Ha, ha. You are exceedingly modest my friend... Even your pen is humble. :) gw

Chris Green
Date: 9/3/2019 7:24:00 AM

Thanks again Gershon. It seems I am dazed and confused more than I am not. :)

Heidi Sands

Date: 9/2/2019 2:27:00 PM

Cute one Chris :)

Chris Green
Date: 9/2/2019 2:35:00 PM

Thanks Heidi. :)

Sandra Adams

Date: 9/2/2019 12:41:00 PM

love the way you penned this one, i haven't looked into the contest so not sure what it requires, but this piece speaks volumes...good luck in the contest! :) hugs

Chris Green
Date: 9/2/2019 1:03:00 PM

Thanks Sandra. I look forward to your take on this contest as well. I love tying favorite song lyrics to poetry.

Elizabeth Kinch

Date: 9/2/2019 11:47:00 AM

Great job Chris, good luck in the contest.

Chris Green
Date: 9/2/2019 12:09:00 PM

Thank you Elizabeth

CayCay Jennings

Date: 9/2/2019 11:28:00 AM

I saw the title and thought you'd written about me! Dazed and confused by Zeplin is one of my life theme songs, the other being Bonnie Tyler's, "Every now and then I fall apart." Reading this, I finally understand the contest and find what you wrote to be 'cute', well worth my smile. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Chris Green
Date: 9/2/2019 11:36:00 AM

Thanks CayCay. It is one of my favorite songs. I just get a good feeling when I hear it come on the radio.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/2/2019 11:01:00 AM

Aptly said!

Chris Green
Date: 9/2/2019 11:35:00 AM

: )

Alexis Y.

Date: 9/2/2019 10:52:00 AM

Hi Chris, You did a great job with contest challenge. I most definitely "heard" it. I wish you the best of luck in the contest my friend. Enjoy the rest of your day:-) Alexis

Chris Green
Date: 9/2/2019 11:35:00 AM

Thank Alexis. I am happy you enjoyed this