Jerry T Curtis Poet Rhyme

Dazed

Have you ever been confused 
not feeling good nor bad
with thoughts, you've reached your happiest
and reaching it, it's sad
That thing you always wanted
Wanted REALLY REALLY Bad
And if you didn't get it 
You swore, you would go MAD
Just to find, in some short time
The Luster of it lacking
and the one you thought you'd always love
In the next room busy packing

This Is not me, I made it up from past experiences
My wife and I are in love

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Pernell Rodocker May 16, 2014 at 7:40 AM I see in this poem that my mind functions somewhat at a level as yours. I don't mean about subject matter... I mean it has something to do with the way I see things. I tend to see many things that others don't. Please read my poem, "Poetry Is This". I would love to hear what you think! Your poem is wonderful! PR

Tim Smith May 15, 2014 at 3:49 PM Glad you are not dazed and confused Jerry...I had this happen to me. Sorry to say...Excellent my friend...("find" in line 9)...Tim Jerry T Curtis May 15, 2014 at 5:13 PM Thanks Tim, but I must have been a little dazed to screw up line 9. Thanks again