Daytime

Sunrise is coming.
Rested up for what's in store;
Moon has gone to bed.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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January 10, 2009 at 3:11 PM
Nice use of personification to convey your thoughts in this poem. Keep on writing! Karen
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December 21, 2008 at 7:55 PM
Nice haiku, how did you sneak this one past me...Raul
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December 21, 2008 at 7:25 PM
I like the partrait painted in my mind when i Read this.Fantastic poem.And thanks for your warm word about mine....Matt
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