Daystar

Spelunking Ubiquitously Nearby

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Hilda Greenhough

Date: 8/14/2024 8:59:00 AM

This is a surprise acrostic. We'll done.

Benjamin Bartley
Date: 8/14/2024 3:41:00 PM

Thank you.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/11/2024 8:33:00 PM

I can't put my finger on why this pulls me in so, but the effect is positively magnetic! Bravo, Benjamin! ~ Gershon

Benjamin Bartley
Date: 8/14/2024 3:39:00 PM

Thank you. I even surprise myself sometimes.

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 8/10/2024 8:58:00 PM

I love the images this acrostic evokes. :)

Benjamin Bartley
Date: 8/14/2024 3:41:00 PM

Thanks love.

Paige Hind

Date: 8/9/2024 8:56:00 PM

Interesting- the sun IS a daystar

Benjamin Bartley
Date: 8/14/2024 3:42:00 PM

Our daystar. Thanks for the read.