Daystar

Dream peep of early gold rim halo August riser gleeful in exalted chant Yield to dulcet chirp from ornate winger Sunburst orange red splash of heaven Taunt and tease ocean blue mist eyes Amber warm rays dazzle pearl clad beach Revere the hue-rich magic spectra veil

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Regina Elliott

Date: 9/16/2024 2:52:00 AM

Stunning acrostic, Howard. Your brilliance never ceases to amaze me. Have a grand start to your week, good poetry friend. ~

Susan Ashley

Date: 8/29/2024 6:14:00 PM

Dear Howard, I enjoyed the suggestion of birdsong glorifying the ethereal grace and beauty of sunrise and how dawn's rising light and colors play with the ocean's mist and upon the beach. Your reverence for Nature is beautifully expressed with vivid artistic finesse. Your acrostic flows smoothly with rich and magical imagery. Warmest wishes my poet friend.. ~Susan