Daystar

Dawn brings yellow daffodil to dance Above; acceptance peacefulness, for I Yearn yesteryears yoke not being alone, need Shelter and rest in God's wealth shadow star Touch sensation heart with pleasure fill. Anywhere approve ambiance Relief that lacks nothing forever. 7/26/2024

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Miranda Hawley

Date: 8/18/2024 11:14:00 AM

Great ending line. Congratulations to you on your placement in my contest.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 8/4/2024 2:31:00 AM

May the dawn bring you a new star every day to admire love and keep you company Eve, love xo

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 7/30/2024 12:38:00 AM

Loved your acrostic, so well done. It flows perfectly. Hugs.

Ink Empress

Date: 7/27/2024 11:18:00 AM

Dear eve, i really love the alliterations in this and also how youv written this acrostic in such a seamless manner! Especially love “ for I Yearn yesteryears yoke not being alone, need Shelter and rest in God's wealth shadow star” how soulfully touching and meaningful! Pleasure reading this gem! Sending you light always. Best wishes

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/27/2024 7:37:00 AM

Lovely and spiritual write that is uplifting, Eve! Hugs ~ Kim

Tom Woody

Date: 7/27/2024 5:31:00 AM

Ahhh I used Daystar in one on my poems recently. Love that word. Awesome acrostic Eve

Len Gasun

Date: 7/26/2024 10:23:00 PM

Gorgeous and heartwarming acrostic my dear poet friend Eve. I love it and enjoyed reading it today. Thank you so much for sharing. Best wishes in the contest. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs