Daystar

Dawn brings yellow daffodil to dance 
Above; acceptance peacefulness, for I 
Yearn yesteryears yoke not being alone, need 
Shelter and rest in God's wealth shadow star
Touch sensation heart with pleasure fill. 
Anywhere approve ambiance 
Relief that lacks nothing forever.

7/26/2024

feelingsacrostic

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Miranda Hawley

August 18, 2024 at 11:14 AM

Great ending line. Congratulations to you on your placement in my contest.

Mystic Rose Rose

August 4, 2024 at 2:31 AM

May the dawn bring you a new star every day to admire love and keep you company Eve, love xo

Victor Buhagiar

July 30, 2024 at 12:38 AM

Loved your acrostic, so well done. It flows perfectly. Hugs.

Ink Empress

July 27, 2024 at 11:18 AM

Dear eve, i really love the alliterations in this and also how youv written this acrostic in such a seamless manner! Especially love “ for I Yearn yesteryears yoke not being alone, need Shelter and rest in God's wealth shadow star” how soulfully touching and meaningful! Pleasure reading this gem! Sending you light always. Best wishes

Kim Rodrigues

July 27, 2024 at 7:37 AM

Lovely and spiritual write that is uplifting, Eve! Hugs ~ Kim

Len Gasun

July 26, 2024 at 10:23 PM

Gorgeous and heartwarming acrostic my dear poet friend Eve. I love it and enjoyed reading it today. Thank you so much for sharing. Best wishes in the contest. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs

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