Days of Summer

. DAYS OF SUMMER sun is scorching the grass melting the ice in a glass of tea fire is burning the trees egg cooking on the hood of a car Entred in Chris D.Aechtner" Pseudo-haiku-cuckoo-cuckhosis~contest 06/30/11

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/4/2011 12:26:00 AM

I sure enjoyed reading what you think of for days of summer. that is one hot summer with eggs cooking on the car's hood! Dog days! cute poem!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/2/2011 12:33:00 PM

amazing artwork of expression.. summer inspires, teresa.. winning luck to you! :) huggs, nette

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/1/2011 10:55:00 AM

Enjoyed reading the words that flowed from your pen today Teresa. I hope you have a wonderful fun filled weekend and that you find miles of inspiration along the way. Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/30/2011 2:45:00 PM

Very unique expressions on the heat of the summer, teresa