Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Poet Quintain (English)

Days In Spring

Cluster buds of blooms phasing peak of prime
Their scents satiates beguiling addiction plug
Rustling birds tweedle on blues and rhymes
Pirouette rainbow butterflies blissful hugs
Spring phenomenon more splendid than Prague

Delectable green prairies tempts butts to sit
Bonding moment desirable to fun loving kin
Blue skies radiance life in sweet fleet
Decorating the world of habitable skin
Leisure love activity a delightful spin

(c) olive eloisa
May O5, 2014
4:19 pm

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Cherl Dunn May 10, 2014 at 7:06 PM Lady you have the poetry spark within you, never let it be blow out, young poets like yourself are not easy to find these days, I enjoy your rush within your written words and the emotions you express. Great job on your word choses and how you use them to express yourself it's fresh. cheri Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 11, 2014 at 3:59 PM Thank you so much Cherl.. :) your comments are so kind.. :) GBU

Sara Kendrick May 10, 2014 at 9:31 AM Enjoyed reading your creative work..Very good poetic quality..Spring brings out the best..Thanks for the visit..Sara Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 11, 2014 at 3:57 PM Thank you Sara.. :) GBU always.. :)

Jake Ponce May 9, 2014 at 8:43 PM Olive, I think this new quintain from you is my most favorite from your arsenal now. It's very beautiful. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 10, 2014 at 3:29 AM THanks thanks much Jake I appreciate your comment.. :)

Andrea Dietrich May 9, 2014 at 5:02 PM what a cute little quintain. I think you had some great alliteration going on in the first part with the B and P sounds. Very nice,Olive. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 10, 2014 at 3:28 AM Thanks much Andrea.. :) I appreciate your drop by.. :D

Paul Callus May 9, 2014 at 4:40 PM Olive_eloi on a roll :) beautiful....keep that pen handy:) // paul Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 9, 2014 at 4:47 PM Lool Paul didn't know actually I just sit then I begin,,:) then it ended thus way..:)

Brooke Dylan May 9, 2014 at 4:18 PM Olive... awesome poem on spring... Each leisure activity is quite delightful... this poem made me smile.. hugs Brooke Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 9, 2014 at 4:48 PM Thank you Brooke..:) I appreciate your comments..:)

Anne-Lise Andresen May 9, 2014 at 3:33 PM - I love the spring - beautiful poem - a pleasure to read, Olive :) - Wish you a nice weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 9, 2014 at 4:47 PM Thanks Anne Lise.. Love your avatar..:)

Dr.Ram Mehta May 9, 2014 at 10:02 AM You bring quite a pleasing picture of spring, Olive Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 9, 2014 at 4:45 PM ThAnks much Sir..:)