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Days In Spring

Cluster buds of blooms phasing peak of prime Their scents satiates beguiling addiction plug Rustling birds tweedle on blues and rhymes Pirouette rainbow butterflies blissful hugs Spring phenomenon more splendid than Prague Delectable green prairies tempts butts to sit Bonding moment desirable to fun loving kin Blue skies radiance life in sweet fleet Decorating the world of habitable skin Leisure love activity a delightful spin (c) olive eloisa May O5, 2014 4:19 pm

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Cherl Dunn
Date: 5/10/2014 7:06:00 PM
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Lady you have the poetry spark within you, never let it be blow out, young poets like yourself are not easy to find these days, I enjoy your rush within your written words and the emotions you express. Great job on your word choses and how you use them to express yourself it's fresh. cheri
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/11/2014 3:59:00 PM
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Thank you so much Cherl.. :) your comments are so kind.. :) GBU
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/10/2014 9:31:00 AM
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Enjoyed reading your creative work..Very good poetic quality..Spring brings out the best..Thanks for the visit..Sara
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/11/2014 3:57:00 PM
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Thank you Sara.. :) GBU always.. :)
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Jake Ponce
Date: 5/9/2014 8:43:00 PM
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Olive, I think this new quintain from you is my most favorite from your arsenal now. It's very beautiful.
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/10/2014 3:29:00 AM
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THanks thanks much Jake I appreciate your comment.. :)
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 5/9/2014 5:02:00 PM
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what a cute little quintain. I think you had some great alliteration going on in the first part with the B and P sounds. Very nice,Olive.
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/10/2014 3:28:00 AM
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Thanks much Andrea.. :) I appreciate your drop by.. :D
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Paul Callus
Date: 5/9/2014 4:40:00 PM
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Olive_eloi on a roll :) beautiful....keep that pen handy:) // paul
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/9/2014 4:47:00 PM
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Lool Paul didn't know actually I just sit then I begin,,:) then it ended thus way..:)
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Brooke Dylan
Date: 5/9/2014 4:18:00 PM
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Olive... awesome poem on spring... Each leisure activity is quite delightful... this poem made me smile.. hugs Brooke
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/9/2014 4:48:00 PM
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Thank you Brooke..:) I appreciate your comments..:)
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/9/2014 3:33:00 PM
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- I love the spring - beautiful poem - a pleasure to read, Olive :) - Wish you a nice weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/9/2014 4:47:00 PM
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Thanks Anne Lise.. Love your avatar..:)
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Dr.Ram Mehta
Date: 5/9/2014 10:02:00 AM
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You bring quite a pleasing picture of spring, Olive
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/9/2014 4:45:00 PM
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ThAnks much Sir..:)

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