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Day's Adventures

Day's Adventures bacon and three eggs red hues, shadows on the hills old man, one small dog Robert J. Lindley, 4-13-2018 Haiku, ( Where Is The Soap)

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Maria Williams

Date: 4/15/2018 4:31:00 AM

I love Haikus, I have a Japanese daughter in law, and she has made me very aware of what a fascinating form this truly is. The time spent reading haiku, even in translation, can draw even the less-poetically inclined into its spell.You have a fine understanding of this form Robert, you have created a real beauty here....Maria

Chuck Melugin

Date: 4/14/2018 5:17:00 AM

Robert, how about an invite? 3 lines...24k fine!

Robert Lindley
Date: 4/14/2018 8:45:00 AM

Thank you Chuck. Glad you liked this haiku. Writing haiku's is not my usual poetry form, so I never know how well they translate to the readers. So far, seems they go over quite well. Thanks for commenting..

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 4/13/2018 2:06:00 PM

I like Robert's comment, vignettes, a pleasure to read my friend. xomo!

Robert Lindley
Date: 4/14/2018 8:42:00 AM

Thank you my friend. Yes, I knew you would get it my friend. Seems we oft think much alike in our poetry..

Arturo Michael

Date: 4/13/2018 6:09:00 AM

That's me during the week...a little more action on the weekend of course...All the best Robert...

Robert Lindley
Date: 4/14/2018 8:40:00 AM

Thank you my friend. Nice to see you understand and are able for the more action on weekends....

Tom Cunningham

Date: 4/13/2018 5:20:00 AM

Sounds like its going to be a great day Robert. Tom.

Robert Lindley
Date: 4/13/2018 5:26:00 AM

Yep, and each one that I, wake up in, starts off fine. And my actually waking up insures that my friend! Thanks for reading and commenting my friend.