Day's Adventures

Day's Adventures

bacon and three eggs
red hues, shadows on the hills
old man, one small dog

Robert J. Lindley, 4-13-2018
Haiku, ( Where Is The Soap)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Williams Avatar
April 15, 2018 at 4:31 AM
I love Haikus, I have a Japanese daughter in law, and she has made me very aware of what a fascinating form this truly is. The time spent reading haiku, even in translation, can draw even the less-poetically inclined into its spell.You have a fine understanding of this form Robert, you have created a real beauty here....Maria
Melugin Avatar
April 14, 2018 at 5:17 AM
Robert, how about an invite? 3 lines...24k fine!
Lindley Avatar
April 14, 2018 at 8:45 AM
Thank you Chuck. Glad you liked this haiku. Writing haiku's is not my usual poetry form, so I never know how well they translate to the readers. So far, seems they go over quite well. Thanks for commenting..
Pigeon Tart Avatar
April 13, 2018 at 2:06 PM
I like Robert's comment, vignettes, a pleasure to read my friend. xomo!
Lindley Avatar
April 14, 2018 at 8:42 AM
Thank you my friend. Yes, I knew you would get it my friend. Seems we oft think much alike in our poetry..
Michael Avatar
April 13, 2018 at 6:09 AM
That's me during the week...a little more action on the weekend of course...All the best Robert...
Lindley Avatar
April 14, 2018 at 8:40 AM
Thank you my friend. Nice to see you understand and are able for the more action on weekends....
Cunningham Avatar
April 13, 2018 at 5:20 AM
Sounds like its going to be a great day Robert. Tom.
Lindley Avatar
April 13, 2018 at 5:26 AM
Yep, and each one that I, wake up in, starts off fine. And my actually waking up insures that my friend! Thanks for reading and commenting my friend.
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