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Daydreaming Acrostic

Daring to hope a fantasy really can come true
All day long I dream of you
You are always in my thoughts
Dreaming peacefully in a world of my own
Reality isn’t everything we want in our life
Every daydream takes away our worry and strife
All encompassing thoughts we don’t ever need to share
My inner desires of which I am now aware
I have dreams I will probably never fulfill
No one can take these thoughts away
Go on and daydream – it could brighten up your day 

Jan Allison
2nd July 2014
~awarded 1st place~

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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen Date: 1/14/2017 6:01:00 PM You brightened up my day with this cute poem. No wonder you were awarded 1st place. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 1/14/2017 6:22:00 PM Thanks Dane Ann:-) hugs Jan xx

Kelly Deschler Date: 8/21/2014 1:14:00 AM I love the positive message you send in this write. Life would be so boring if we did not dream and let fantasy take over once in awhile.... A beautiful acrostic poem, Jan. I enjoyed it very much! Congrats on another win! :) Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 8/21/2014 2:19:00 AM Thanks Kelly i can't believe how well I'm doing in contests - making me so so happy and taking my mind away from issues with my parents which are so so stressful:-( Hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich Date: 8/19/2014 5:04:00 PM such a sweet one, Jan. I used to daydream all that time. That was another place and another time. congrats to you. I don't think I saw this one of yours before. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 8/19/2014 5:07:00 PM Thanks for taking the time to comment Andre I do appreciate it:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 8/19/2014 11:14:00 AM Love ur daydream Jan! Congrats on top win! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 8/19/2014 3:56:00 PM Thanks so much for dropping by i do appreciate it :-) Hugs jan xxx

John Lawless Date: 8/19/2014 8:36:00 AM Thank goodness there are still daydreamers around....at least some of us that they haven't labeled and put on medication. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 8/19/2014 8:42:00 AM LOL John it helps us get through the day and away from the stresses of reality - if it works how can they knock it! Hugs jan xxx

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 8/19/2014 5:12:00 AM Very serene and soothing write on day dreaming, Jan. congrats on the win Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 8/19/2014 6:06:00 AM Many thanks for your lovely comment I do appreciate your continued support Dr Mehta:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Casarah Nance Date: 8/18/2014 6:26:00 PM I sure do love to daydream! Grats on a great winning poem Jan. xxo Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 8/19/2014 3:02:00 AM Thanks Casarah i may wake up and it was all a lovely dream! Hugs jan xx

Tim Smith Date: 8/18/2014 6:17:00 PM Well you can dream about another first place Jan :)....congrats Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 8/19/2014 3:01:00 AM I need pinching Tim this is unreal - me doing something good no way! Hugs jan xxx

Poet Destroyer A Date: 8/18/2014 6:10:00 PM Hello Jan, Congratulations!!! Enjoy your winning poem, I had tons of fun, going over the winning poems. If you like, stop by my latest blog "Things That Suck" Featuring Andrea's awesome title and poem, if you like. Always ~LINDA~ Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 8/18/2014 6:16:00 PM Ohhh thanks so much Linda i will drop by the other winners tomorrow am off to bed now:-) Hugs jan xxxx

Lucilla Carrillo Date: 7/4/2014 7:25:00 AM This is a very good acrostic. I love the last line. Thanks for sharing... Lucilla Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 7/4/2014 7:27:00 AM Thanks Lucilla for your lovely comment. Hugs as ever Jan xxx

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 7/4/2014 3:40:00 AM - To daydream is a lovely thing ...... no pain - only pleasure! - Nice poem, Jan! - Have a great day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 7/4/2014 3:57:00 AM It is Anne Lise. Thanks for the lovely comment. Hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus Date: 7/3/2014 5:57:00 PM "Daydreaming" is one of the first songs that I wrote; still hold it close to my heart. Your poem is beautiful and I love the flow which is a must in a good acrostic. Where would we be without daydreaming? Goodnight, Jan and take care. // paul Login to Reply Jadazzle United Date: 7/3/2014 5:59:00 PM Thanks Paul for the lovely comment - nothing wrong in day dreaming - lets keep the dreams alive Paul:-) Hugs Jan xxxxx

Tim Smith Date: 7/2/2014 5:39:00 PM My world is upside down...I daydream all night at work and daydream again all day...This is beautiful Jan..hugs Tim Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 7/2/2014 6:02:00 PM Oh thanks you so much for the lovely comment Tim - its our dreams that keep us alive - take us away from the complexities in our lives if only for a short while. Hugs as ever my friend. Jan xxx

Nette Onclaud Date: 7/2/2014 5:29:00 PM ohh, this just rolls off the tongue...i do so love the way you expressed this as i daydream often, jan.. huggs Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 7/2/2014 5:35:00 PM Thanks Nette for the lovely comment i've just reformatted the poem - hope they get the bug sorted soon i forget to go back and check ... too busy daydreaming I guess! Hugs Jan xxx

Casarah Nance Date: 7/2/2014 5:26:00 PM :) I spend most of my day in a day dream it is a happy place to go :) Great poem Jan you make me smile :) Happy Hugs!! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 7/2/2014 5:31:00 PM Takes you to a happy place no one can invade Casarah:-) Hugs jan xxx