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Daydreaming Acrostic

Daring to hope a fantasy really can come true All day long I dream of you You are always in my thoughts Dreaming peacefully in a world of my own Reality isn’t everything we want in our life Every daydream takes away our worry and strife All encompassing thoughts we don’t ever need to share My inner desires of which I am now aware I have dreams I will probably never fulfill No one can take these thoughts away Go on and daydream – it could brighten up your day Jan Allison 2nd July 2014 ~awarded 1st place~

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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 1/14/2017 6:01:00 PM

You brightened up my day with this cute poem. No wonder you were awarded 1st place.

Jan Allison
Date: 1/14/2017 6:22:00 PM

Thanks Dane Ann:-) hugs Jan xx

Kelly Deschler

Date: 8/21/2014 1:14:00 AM

I love the positive message you send in this write. Life would be so boring if we did not dream and let fantasy take over once in awhile.... A beautiful acrostic poem, Jan. I enjoyed it very much! Congrats on another win! :)

Jan Allison
Date: 8/21/2014 2:19:00 AM

Thanks Kelly i can't believe how well I'm doing in contests - making me so so happy and taking my mind away from issues with my parents which are so so stressful:-( Hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/19/2014 5:04:00 PM

such a sweet one, Jan. I used to daydream all that time. That was another place and another time. congrats to you. I don't think I saw this one of yours before.

Jan Allison
Date: 8/19/2014 5:07:00 PM

Thanks for taking the time to comment Andre I do appreciate it:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 8/19/2014 11:14:00 AM

Love ur daydream Jan! Congrats on top win!

Jan Allison
Date: 8/19/2014 3:56:00 PM

Thanks so much for dropping by i do appreciate it :-) Hugs jan xxx

John Lawless

Date: 8/19/2014 8:36:00 AM

Thank goodness there are still daydreamers around....at least some of us that they haven't labeled and put on medication.

Jan Allison
Date: 8/19/2014 8:42:00 AM

LOL John it helps us get through the day and away from the stresses of reality - if it works how can they knock it! Hugs jan xxx

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/19/2014 5:12:00 AM

Very serene and soothing write on day dreaming, Jan. congrats on the win

Jan Allison
Date: 8/19/2014 6:06:00 AM

Many thanks for your lovely comment I do appreciate your continued support Dr Mehta:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Casarah Nance

Date: 8/18/2014 6:26:00 PM

I sure do love to daydream! Grats on a great winning poem Jan. xxo

Jan Allison
Date: 8/19/2014 3:02:00 AM

Thanks Casarah i may wake up and it was all a lovely dream! Hugs jan xx

Tim Smith

Date: 8/18/2014 6:17:00 PM

Well you can dream about another first place Jan :)....congrats

Jan Allison
Date: 8/19/2014 3:01:00 AM

I need pinching Tim this is unreal - me doing something good no way! Hugs jan xxx

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/18/2014 6:10:00 PM

Hello Jan, Congratulations!!! Enjoy your winning poem, I had tons of fun, going over the winning poems. If you like, stop by my latest blog "Things That Suck" Featuring Andrea's awesome title and poem, if you like. Always ~LINDA~

Jan Allison
Date: 8/18/2014 6:16:00 PM

Ohhh thanks so much Linda i will drop by the other winners tomorrow am off to bed now:-) Hugs jan xxxx

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 7/4/2014 7:25:00 AM

This is a very good acrostic. I love the last line. Thanks for sharing... Lucilla

Jan Allison
Date: 7/4/2014 7:27:00 AM

Thanks Lucilla for your lovely comment. Hugs as ever Jan xxx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/4/2014 3:40:00 AM

- To daydream is a lovely thing ...... no pain - only pleasure! - Nice poem, Jan! - Have a great day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison
Date: 7/4/2014 3:57:00 AM

It is Anne Lise. Thanks for the lovely comment. Hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus

Date: 7/3/2014 5:57:00 PM

"Daydreaming" is one of the first songs that I wrote; still hold it close to my heart. Your poem is beautiful and I love the flow which is a must in a good acrostic. Where would we be without daydreaming? Goodnight, Jan and take care. // paul

Jadazzle United
Date: 7/3/2014 5:59:00 PM

Thanks Paul for the lovely comment - nothing wrong in day dreaming - lets keep the dreams alive Paul:-) Hugs Jan xxxxx

Tim Smith

Date: 7/2/2014 5:39:00 PM

My world is upside down...I daydream all night at work and daydream again all day...This is beautiful Jan..hugs Tim

Jan Allison
Date: 7/2/2014 6:02:00 PM

Oh thanks you so much for the lovely comment Tim - its our dreams that keep us alive - take us away from the complexities in our lives if only for a short while. Hugs as ever my friend. Jan xxx

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/2/2014 5:29:00 PM

ohh, this just rolls off the tongue...i do so love the way you expressed this as i daydream often, jan.. huggs

Jan Allison
Date: 7/2/2014 5:35:00 PM

Thanks Nette for the lovely comment i've just reformatted the poem - hope they get the bug sorted soon i forget to go back and check ... too busy daydreaming I guess! Hugs Jan xxx

Casarah Nance

Date: 7/2/2014 5:26:00 PM

:) I spend most of my day in a day dream it is a happy place to go :) Great poem Jan you make me smile :) Happy Hugs!!

Jan Allison
Date: 7/2/2014 5:31:00 PM

Takes you to a happy place no one can invade Casarah:-) Hugs jan xxx