Daydreamer

I long for a moment, to wander away One respite of summer, that has drifted away I wish I could lie down flat like a child Watch as the clouds drift over my head Hide in the grass, and smile in my bed To remind me what matters, and to dream for awhile…
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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March 12, 2012 at 11:35 PM
CARRIE, Congratulations! with your wonderful WIN... ;-) enjoyed your POEM, ~ always*PD
Merryman Avatar
March 12, 2012 at 8:34 PM
A lovely write, Carrie. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
Brown Avatar
March 12, 2012 at 9:14 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's "Just A Verse" contest Carrie. Love,Carol
Guzzi Avatar
March 11, 2012 at 7:03 PM
we had that chance now we have another no reason not to do this again;) Congrad's on your win! Light & Love
Dietrich Avatar
March 11, 2012 at 5:57 PM
Love it, carrie. A well deserved win.
J.T. Avatar
March 11, 2012 at 2:02 PM
Congrats on your win!- JH
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March 11, 2012 at 11:52 AM
Congrats on your win, Carrie! I really enjoyed reading this beauty yesterday and today. I thought I had commented before, but I see that I didn't. I love the imagery. Blessings, Rhonda
Sweetheart Avatar
March 11, 2012 at 11:11 AM
congrats Carrie on a splendid win for another incredible write luv..
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March 11, 2012 at 7:40 AM
Ooh nice one congratulations Carrie xx
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March 10, 2012 at 4:43 PM
No one can take from you your dreams....Lovely poem Carrie,thank you. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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March 10, 2012 at 1:33 PM
Carrie, I think many of us wish there were more moments for dreams. I bow to the queen of imagery on this masterpiece! Love, Carolyn
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