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Daydreamer

I long for a moment, to wander away One respite of summer, that has drifted away I wish I could lie down flat like a child Watch as the clouds drift over my head Hide in the grass, and smile in my bed To remind me what matters, and to dream for awhile…

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/12/2012 11:35:00 PM
CARRIE, Congratulations! with your wonderful WIN... ;-) enjoyed your POEM, ~ always*PD
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Date: 3/12/2012 8:34:00 PM
A lovely write, Carrie. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 3/12/2012 9:14:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's "Just A Verse" contest Carrie. Love,Carol
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Date: 3/11/2012 7:03:00 PM
we had that chance now we have another no reason not to do this again;) Congrad's on your win! Light & Love
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Date: 3/11/2012 5:57:00 PM
Love it, carrie. A well deserved win.
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Date: 3/11/2012 2:02:00 PM
Congrats on your win!- JH
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Date: 3/11/2012 11:52:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Carrie! I really enjoyed reading this beauty yesterday and today. I thought I had commented before, but I see that I didn't. I love the imagery. Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 3/11/2012 11:11:00 AM
congrats Carrie on a splendid win for another incredible write luv..
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Date: 3/11/2012 7:40:00 AM
Ooh nice one congratulations Carrie xx
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Date: 3/10/2012 4:43:00 PM
No one can take from you your dreams....Lovely poem Carrie,thank you. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Date: 3/10/2012 1:33:00 PM
Carrie, I think many of us wish there were more moments for dreams. I bow to the queen of imagery on this masterpiece! Love, Carolyn
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