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Day-Dream

Day dream

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Hannah Borke

August 15, 2017 at 10:58 AM

Enjoyed!

Joanna Daniel

June 26, 2017 at 11:43 PM

Nice daydream, Supraja:) I agree with Andrea, there are some different rhymes:)

Supraja Kannan

June 27, 2017 at 12:17 AM

Thank you Jo... I will change it to rhymes...

Andrea Dietrich

June 26, 2017 at 10:09 PM

cute poem,Supraja. It actually has two or three different rhymes in it!

Supraja Kannan

June 27, 2017 at 12:16 AM

Thank you Andrea... I will change the form to rhymes....

Paul Callus

June 26, 2017 at 5:16 PM

After reading this lovely monorhyme I must promise myself to spend more time day-dreaming, Supraja:) Unfortunately, as happens in most dreams, we wake up at the best part!! Regards // paul

Supraja Kannan

June 27, 2017 at 12:15 AM

True... It will be nice Paul... We can think about anything and we can go anywhere... Thank you so much for your kind visit...

Anne-Lise Andresen

June 26, 2017 at 8:24 AM

- A wonderful dream in this beautiful poem, Supraja - ... continue with your dreams, I love to read them - 38 C is too much ... 20 to 24 C is enough for me :) - Sending you with pleasure a little rain :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Supraja Kannan

June 27, 2017 at 12:06 AM

Thank you so much Anne for your kind visit... Oh! You are so generous...