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Date written: 05/02/2025

Daybreak Hiku


     sweet song of d
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                               b
                                 r
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                                    a
                                      k
cardinal's knife cuts through the air ~
                         my heart sings along
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Guptar Avatar
May 4, 2025 at 11:27 AM
Heartiest congratulations dear poet on your top placement in this contest with a lovely Hiku on daybreak. Wish you a pleasant weekend.
Dietrich Avatar
May 3, 2025 at 10:07 PM
Glorious! Congrats on the win
Ibeh Avatar
May 4, 2025 at 6:17 AM
Thank you very much, Andrea:-)
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