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Daybreak

Subtle patient and gentle, dawn's mighty force arises, weakening and permeating the dark in stages, fading into multi-colored hues of blue until it's lightest shade looms overhead stationary; eventually as intensity deepens by noon to align with the all powerful distant sun shining at highest peak, the encompassing surrounding of earth's outer surface in slowest degrees descends into evening with the bluest depths as the lessening strength of day retreats into the dense overtaking of the ominous struggle of night to rest for another bright awakening.

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Date: 8/9/2013 9:03:00 AM
An absolute powerful capture of nature in the middle of its song. Great job!
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Date: 8/9/2013 9:00:00 AM
This is my kind of free verse, you wrote this a lot like I would write a poem about 'Daybreak'! I really enjoyed reading this delightful poem this morning! What a lovely piece, Great Work!!
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