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Written on November 23, 2023

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Sleepy eyes, unhurried by the light, Stirring the morning with song, Dazzling shafts charm away the bleak night. Whispered prayers are morning’s birthright, She sighs across souls all her lifelong. Sleepy eyes, unhurried by the light. Glistening stars rouse poetry which I write, Fragile as the moon who boasts of being strong. Dazzling shafts charm away the bleak night. Reflections of grace I see in hindsight, Breaking through the mist, joy to prolong, Sleepy eyes, unhurried by the light. Serenity in the heart, there in black and white, Scented by soft hopes and prayers, never wrong. Dazzling shafts charm away the bleak night. Hastening across the lives, beautiful and bright, Remembering the souls who seem so headstrong… Sleepy eyes, unhurried by the light, Dazzling shafts charm away the bleak night.

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Date: 11/23/2023 4:53:00 PM
As night gives way to morning light is the perfect time for coffee and mental preparation for what may come. A lovely poem my friend.
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Date: 11/23/2023 2:39:00 PM
such exquisite imagery, Regina! Your words and lines flowed effortlessly. I just love the smoothness of your poems and how you capture your message so beautifully. I admire your skill set. I also appreciate the refrain..it was powerful. Hope you had a great Thanksgiving, hugs, Sara
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Date: 11/23/2023 12:19:00 PM
You do this form so well, your words create a vibrant picture which displays great imagery.. the rhymes, the flow and refrains are very good..
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Date: 11/23/2023 9:24:00 AM
A beautiful and bright poem with a rhythm flowing as the daybreak. Many wonderful lines, but particularly impressed with" Glistening stars rouse poetry which I write". Wish you a very good day. KG
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