Gershon Wolf Poet Rhyme

Day Rise

The sun rises
  the stars give way
The dew glistens
  on the meadow, in the hay

Lovers posed, still
  in each others' arms
Tenderly mothers gaze, at
  at babe's resting charms 

'Till factory whistles blow
  machines fire up
As our planet reaches
  for its coffee cup

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Caren Krutsinger March 3, 2019 at 10:06 PM Ah, so true. Especially the last line! Gershon Wolf March 3, 2019 at 10:17 PM Yup. I believe that you and I definitely are right there with Planet Earth reaching for that cup of Java! :) gw

Line Gauthier March 3, 2019 at 8:57 PM Charming poem, Gershon. Gershon Wolf March 3, 2019 at 10:16 PM Once again, with feeling: I just can't thank you enough for all your support. Greatly appreciated. ~ Gershon

Heidi Sands March 3, 2019 at 1:59 PM Great one Gershon :) Gershon Wolf March 3, 2019 at 3:14 PM Heidi, thank you for the view and the encouraging comment. :) gw

Jennifer Proxenos March 3, 2019 at 12:56 PM This is a very clever poem Gershon - absolutely love it - very true - what real life is all about! Poetry hugs, Jennifer. Gershon Wolf March 3, 2019 at 3:14 PM Really appreciate your support and encouragement on this one, Jennifer. Poetry hug reciprocated. ~ Gershon