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Day Rise

The sun rises the stars give way The dew glistens on the meadow, in the hay Lovers posed, still in each others' arms Tenderly mothers gaze, at at babe's resting charms 'Till factory whistles blow machines fire up As our planet reaches for its coffee cup

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 3/3/2019 10:06:00 PM
Ah, so true. Especially the last line!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/3/2019 10:17:00 PM
Yup. I believe that you and I definitely are right there with Planet Earth reaching for that cup of Java! :) gw
Date: 3/3/2019 8:57:00 PM
Charming poem, Gershon.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/3/2019 10:16:00 PM
Once again, with feeling: I just can't thank you enough for all your support. Greatly appreciated. ~ Gershon
Date: 3/3/2019 1:59:00 PM
Great one Gershon :)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/3/2019 3:14:00 PM
Heidi, thank you for the view and the encouraging comment. :) gw
Date: 3/3/2019 12:56:00 PM
This is a very clever poem Gershon - absolutely love it - very true - what real life is all about! Poetry hugs, Jennifer.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/3/2019 3:14:00 PM
Really appreciate your support and encouragement on this one, Jennifer. Poetry hug reciprocated. ~ Gershon

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