Day One

Day One

Day one lays unfathomed
Like mist in the Sky.
Oh dear mouth halts the murmur
And behold the noon sky.
Eyes on the line watch the new heavens
As it marches gently with the noon.
On this clear noon sky, yet decision ceases to be made
And accepts being delayed till in the moon.

How vague will day one continues to be
Like a buried resources?
The day soon speaks needless to wither words:
The night will come and the session will begin.
And on this sacred night will this decision be proclaimed
With no iota of doubt,
That a nation will become his own;
With the next day never in doubt.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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November 27, 2013 at 1:26 AM
Abdulhafeez, Thank you for spreading and sharing your kindness. You know me I’ will always enjoy stopping by with love and support, no matter if I do not Understand what I am reading at times. I am very grateful and thankful to all who have been supportive of me one way or another. Your heartfelt words are the main attraction of who you are… Thanks for your inspiring visit. ----- Happy Thanksgiving ~ LINDA
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November 27, 2013 at 4:00 AM
Thanks a lot poet friend Linda. Happy Thanksgiving to you too.
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November 27, 2013 at 4:00 AM
Gasun Avatar
July 7, 2013 at 10:31 AM
My biggest congratulations on your big win my dear friend, AO! A great write indeed! Thanks a lot for sharing! love lots and big hugs, Leonora
Lamoureux Avatar
July 7, 2013 at 7:42 AM
Most excellent Day One. Congratulations A.O
Oyewole Avatar
July 7, 2013 at 12:10 AM
Thanks everyone... AO
Jones Avatar
July 6, 2013 at 9:34 PM
This is lovely AO..congratulations
A  Avatar
July 6, 2013 at 2:23 PM
this is one cool poem, CONGRATS, love Skat
Delaney Avatar
July 6, 2013 at 1:37 AM
Wonderful write. Congratulations, SuZ
A   Avatar
July 5, 2013 at 11:25 PM
Hi Abdulhafeez, thank you for your day one entry and win... congrats!!! :-) From: Linda
Candy Avatar
July 5, 2013 at 10:53 PM
I enjoyed this poem. Congratz on your well deserved win... :)
Thomas Avatar
July 5, 2013 at 6:36 AM
Wow each word compliments, the next and sums up a beautiful poem. Ty4sharing abdul.....cheriex
Thomas Avatar
July 6, 2013 at 1:43 PM
Congratulations:0)
Sivey Avatar
July 1, 2013 at 5:13 PM
This is a spectacular write Abdulhafeez! I truly loved reading this enlightening poem this evening! What a terrific and fabulous piece, Great Work!!
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