Day One

Day One

Day one lays unfathomed
Like mist in the Sky.
Oh dear mouth halts the murmur
And behold the noon sky.
Eyes on the line watch the new heavens
As it marches gently with the noon.
On this clear noon sky, yet decision ceases to be made
And accepts being delayed till in the moon.

How vague will day one continues to be
Like a buried resources?
The day soon speaks needless to wither words:
The night will come and the session will begin.
And on this sacred night will this decision be proclaimed
With no iota of doubt,
That a nation will become his own;
With the next day never in doubt.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 11/27/2013 1:26:00 AM
Abdulhafeez, Thank you for spreading and sharing your kindness. You know me I’ will always enjoy stopping by with love and support, no matter if I do not Understand what I am reading at times. I am very grateful and thankful to all who have been supportive of me one way or another. Your heartfelt words are the main attraction of who you are… Thanks for your inspiring visit. ----- Happy Thanksgiving ~ LINDA
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Abdulhafeez Oyewole
Date: 11/27/2013 4:00:00 AM
Thanks a lot poet friend Linda. Happy Thanksgiving to you too.
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Abdulhafeez Oyewole
Date: 11/27/2013 4:00:00 AM
Date: 7/7/2013 10:31:00 AM
My biggest congratulations on your big win my dear friend, AO! A great write indeed! Thanks a lot for sharing! love lots and big hugs, Leonora
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Date: 7/7/2013 7:42:00 AM
Most excellent Day One. Congratulations A.O
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Date: 7/7/2013 12:10:00 AM
Thanks everyone... AO
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Date: 7/6/2013 9:34:00 PM
This is lovely AO..congratulations
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Date: 7/6/2013 2:23:00 PM
this is one cool poem, CONGRATS, love Skat
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Date: 7/6/2013 1:37:00 AM
Wonderful write. Congratulations, SuZ
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Date: 7/5/2013 11:25:00 PM
Hi Abdulhafeez, thank you for your day one entry and win... congrats!!! :-) From: Linda
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Date: 7/5/2013 10:53:00 PM
I enjoyed this poem. Congratz on your well deserved win... :)
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Date: 7/5/2013 6:36:00 AM
Wow each word compliments, the next and sums up a beautiful poem. Ty4sharing abdul.....cheriex
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Cherie Thomas
Date: 7/6/2013 1:43:00 PM
Congratulations:0)
Date: 7/1/2013 5:13:00 PM
This is a spectacular write Abdulhafeez! I truly loved reading this enlightening poem this evening! What a terrific and fabulous piece, Great Work!!
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