Day of Unproductivity

Another rainy day! Pouring non-stop, Evergreens seem not to mind - swaying merrily with the wild wind, Concrete roads turning into crystal lakes with the sweeping waves, Somber, grey clouds reflect their opaque shadows on the puddles, Sky and Rain meet lovingly in the scintillating tiniest drops. Sky gloomy, Air - misty, hazy, Some days are unproductive - let them be! The little pieces of enchanting happiness - Books, and paints, and yarn and a large window - let them take precedence! Not going to count the jobs that are done, Or not done! Will not count the days to return To the usual routine, and dreary days of utmost productivity! I will simply watch the glistening raindrops, Enjoy the pitter-patter, All day long! October 1, 2020

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Jcb Brul

Date: 10/11/2020 2:03:00 AM

Revisiting this poem to read once more and be mesmerized!! Lovely!!!

Jcb Brul

Date: 10/1/2020 10:08:00 PM

So enchanting my friend... I love your 3 parting lines, "I will simply watch the glistening raindrops, Enjoy the pitter-patter, All day long!" I, too love the rhythm of the raindrops.. Lovely piece!

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 10/1/2020 10:52:00 PM

Thanks, dear JCB. You always bring a smile on my face by your incredibly encouraging comments. Love raindrops - that’s for sure! Love, Mala

Angela Crabtree

Date: 10/1/2020 6:08:00 PM

Sounds like a good day to me. ;) Great poem! Thanks for sharing. Peace, Angie

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 10/1/2020 10:50:00 PM

Thanks, my friend. Really glad you liked the poem. Best wishes. Mala

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/1/2020 3:31:00 PM

Wonderfully descriptive of rainy images, Mala--I like your upbeat outlook on such days--so well articulated in the ending lines.

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 10/1/2020 4:51:00 PM

Thanks, Vijay! Glad you liked the images of a rainy day - it's so soothing!

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 10/1/2020 3:08:00 PM

Hello Mala, I feel the same way on those rainy days. I like to listen to the raindrops falling onto the window sill. I like the sound of the rain hitting the roof. Enjoy your evening my friend. love Darlene

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/2/2020 10:15:00 AM

Hello Mala, yes it is lovely to hear the raindrops falling on the roof. I enjoy the sound. I can listen to this all day. Hugs, Darlene.

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 10/1/2020 4:54:00 PM

Hi Darlene, thank you so much. Isn't it lovely to hear the raindrops falling on the roof? I feel like stopping all activities and sitting beside the window! Hugs, Mala