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Day Life Began

Into the cathedral she came: Veiled face White lace Looking at me: Down aisle I smile My heart, in awe of what is to be: Soars miles She smiles At the altar I stood and soon: My bride Beside At the right time I: Lift veil See grail She is a sight to behold: Eyes gaze Joy haze With vows exchanged, our lives: Entwine Cloud nine That day I had all I wanted and needed: New life With wife

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Joanna Daniel

Date: 10/23/2016 10:29:00 AM

Wow, nicely penned, Richard:) I have never tried out this form, but you have done a great job with yours:)and thank you for encouraging me:)

Jan Allison

Date: 10/2/2016 6:00:00 PM

what a delightful string of footles Richard - I love writing this form and have had great fun in the past creating a story like you have done:-) hugs Jan xx

Richard Martins
Date: 10/5/2016 1:57:00 AM

Thank you Jan, it was a relatively easy story to tell given the memories :)