Day Is Done

the kitchen's hot
we do our stepping
without thinking
minds on the work
minds on the mouths to feed
we weave
in around each other
yet another marriage dance
another intimate arrangement

still light
hands working fast
passing pots and oil
passing covers and spoons
eyebrow raised
all done
sweet garlic floats above us
butter on the table
white napkins in your hands
serve
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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April 30, 2009 at 12:54 PM
Yes, life gets too busy indeed. Creative way to forward that message. I like the everyday life feel of this poem. Most will relate to your words. Thank you for your kind words on my poem. Keep on writing! Karen
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April 27, 2009 at 10:44 AM
a great poem, thanks for your kind comments on my poem your great love for me, I wrote it ages ago so am surprised it is featured, God bless from diane
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April 27, 2009 at 10:36 AM
This is a fantastic poem with images of many things an dthe symbolic word "weave" weaving all together.
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