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Day Dreaming

I was tired of reshuffling the stars in silent night. Will you come and stay with me for a while? I will give you my light years to reach the hurting valley. Sit down beside me and rest your head on my drooping shoulders. Together we will cross the dark river of doubts conversing with fireflies. You are carrying my unborn children in your deep thoughts. Flesh, blood and bones pain between the ribs and arrhythmic throbs. Small pebbles on the beach we are dreaming an ocean in our eyes. Waves are high and wind is strong. We are ready to drink the blue sky. SATISH VERMA

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/27/2010 6:40:00 AM
Very imaginative and interesting flight of the day dreaming, Satish
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Date: 10/27/2010 6:37:00 AM
I don't like to use the word love too much for it makes it become less meaningful but here I would have to say that I love this one..Very exquisite wording...Sara
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Date: 10/27/2010 6:20:00 AM
poignant yet an eloquent read, satish.. wonderful! warmest, nette
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