Day Break

Day breaking like egg
White light in clouds sunny yolk
Life warmly within
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Andresen Avatar
March 30, 2014 at 7:49 AM
- A new and beautiful day - well done, haiku Neelam :) - Have a nice Sunday. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Sangwai Avatar
March 30, 2014 at 8:37 AM
Thanks. Have a nice day : )
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