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Day At the Races

two horses sprinting 
  neck and neck along the straight 
        yea i’m winning ~ neigh


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David Kavanagh

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Christopher Flaherty

December 21, 2020 at 10:11 AM

Did you have a flutter on it. Reminds me David of you popping into your dad to ask him if he wanted his bet putting on.

Christopher Flaherty

December 28, 2020 at 11:35 AM

Well done congratulations to you fella

David Kavanagh

December 24, 2020 at 2:40 PM

I was constantly broke and getting nowhere, in the end realized I had to give it up, when I changed jobs, start was quite difficult, but Perseverance kicked the habit for sure, cheers David

Christopher Flaherty

December 23, 2020 at 4:55 PM

Yes indeed Sir tiny margins but unless its an each way bet . Unlucky better luck next time. David if i may ask hiw did you manage to stop ?

David Kavanagh

December 21, 2020 at 11:50 AM

Its a reflection on my gambling days Christopher, more often than not my horse would be leading, only to be pipped at the post, Really just a nostril in it, and that’s what makes all the difference in life, tiny margins, cheers David