Day At the Races

two horses sprinting neck and neck along the straight yea i’m winning ~ neigh By David Kavanagh

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Christopher Flaherty

Date: 12/21/2020 10:11:00 AM

Did you have a flutter on it. Reminds me David of you popping into your dad to ask him if he wanted his bet putting on.

Christopher Flaherty
Date: 12/28/2020 11:35:00 AM

Well done congratulations to you fella

David Kavanagh
Date: 12/24/2020 2:40:00 PM

I was constantly broke and getting nowhere, in the end realized I had to give it up, when I changed jobs, start was quite difficult, but Perseverance kicked the habit for sure, cheers David

Christopher Flaherty
Date: 12/23/2020 4:55:00 PM

Yes indeed Sir tiny margins but unless its an each way bet . Unlucky better luck next time. David if i may ask hiw did you manage to stop ?

David Kavanagh
Date: 12/21/2020 11:50:00 AM

Its a reflection on my gambling days Christopher, more often than not my horse would be leading, only to be pipped at the post, Really just a nostril in it, and that’s what makes all the difference in life, tiny margins, cheers David

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 12/20/2020 11:32:00 AM

Laugh out loud fun! xomo

David Kavanagh
Date: 12/20/2020 11:36:00 AM

Damn them nags super Mo, cheers David