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Day At the Beach

Day at the Beach

on a beach girls play
flaunting sexy bikinis...
grinning sharks circle

beachfunmenmetaphorsexysenryu

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Paul Callus

December 2, 2014 at 1:31 PM

Excellent write, Pandita! Lovely image, too! Those 'land' sharks must be looking in awe! Beauty never fails to attract:) hugs // paul

Pandita Sietesantos

December 4, 2014 at 8:53 AM

Hi Paul, thank you so much for your continued support! Best wishes, Pandita

John Michaels

June 5, 2014 at 4:26 AM

Excellent! What a great image. Loving your Haiku, today... you definitely have a talent for it!

Pandita Sietesantos

June 5, 2014 at 6:43 AM

Thank you my friend! I love Haiku and I am learning so much as I go along!

Deborah Shiells

May 30, 2014 at 9:31 AM

Hi Pandita, I loved this write!!! Great imagery to describe what we go through~ Maybe they will swim in another direction:~) Thank you so much for sharing this wonderful write with us. Love and Peace, Deborah

Pandita Sietesantos

May 30, 2014 at 10:32 AM

Hi Deborah, I am so glad you like this one and for your kind comments! Thanks so much! Love to you, my friend!