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Day and Night - Yalto Form

Day and Night - Yalto Form
Birdsong heard 
droplets of dew 
white clouds 
journeying sky 
and bright the sun shines
cometh night 
stars glow
moon beams light 
lovers 
live their dreams 
angels watch 
those beneath their wings
slumbering in their beds 
till
night fades to morning.

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20th  December 2022

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Yalto is a form created by PoetrySoup member Edward Ibeh.

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Paula Goldsmith December 20, 2022 at 11:33 AM A wonderful write/picture. I love it. Have a blessed day................. Beryl Edmonds December 20, 2022 at 5:47 PM Thank you very much Paula, you have a lovely blessed day too… Belle

Victor Buhagiar December 20, 2022 at 1:02 AM A fine poem with great imagery. Best for a win. Beryl Edmonds December 20, 2022 at 5:46 PM Thank you Victor, though this Yalto though isn’t entered in a contest I appreciate your comments… Belle

Tom Cunningham December 19, 2022 at 10:31 PM Great imagery Belle, a shame Edwards form isn't on soups poetry forms list. Hope you have a happy Christmas and good health and happiness in the new year. Tom Beryl Edmonds December 20, 2022 at 5:42 PM Thank you Tom,I agree that the Yalto Edward created should be on the poetry forms list. Best wishes for Christmas and the new year, may it bring you good health and happiness too… Belle

Edward Ibeh December 19, 2022 at 9:15 PM What a marvelous Yalto verse with wonderful imagery, Belle:-) Thoroughly enjoyed! Beryl Edmonds December 20, 2022 at 5:36 PM Thank you very much Edward, I enjoyed writing in the Yalto form that you created… Belle