Day 7

the bird dives --
with fur in its beak it tempts
a cat too often
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Campi Avatar
February 18, 2012 at 12:29 AM
birds and cats! maybe this bird better be careful. cats can be crafty and quick. anyway, a great haiku!!
Lu Avatar
February 17, 2012 at 10:52 AM
Hawks are notorious for that. liked the way you did this in this form of Haiku. nice one.
Kendrick Avatar
February 7, 2012 at 1:31 PM
Interesting work..I suppose that another bird found that its kill was an easy free meal for them..Sara
Henderson Avatar
February 7, 2012 at 2:10 PM
Actually, this was a bird which had already attacked a cat once. It never got the second chance. I saw this actually happen. The bird had teased for probably 15 minutes.
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