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day 7

the bird dives -- with fur in its beak it tempts a cat too often

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Date: 2/18/2012 12:29:00 AM
birds and cats! maybe this bird better be careful. cats can be crafty and quick. anyway, a great haiku!!
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Date: 2/17/2012 10:52:00 AM
Hawks are notorious for that. liked the way you did this in this form of Haiku. nice one.
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Date: 2/7/2012 1:31:00 PM
Interesting work..I suppose that another bird found that its kill was an easy free meal for them..Sara
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Charles Henderson
Date: 2/7/2012 2:10:00 PM
Actually, this was a bird which had already attacked a cat once. It never got the second chance. I saw this actually happen. The bird had teased for probably 15 minutes.